Tuesday, October 26, 2010

"Underwear" -Lawrence Ferlinghetti

 I didn’t get much sleep last night 
thinking about underwear 
Have you ever stopped to consider 
underwear in the abstract 
When you really dig into it 
some shocking problems are raised 
Underwear is something we all have to deal with 
Everyone wears
some kind of underwear 
Even Indians wear underwear 
Even Cubans
wear underwear
The Pope wears underwear I hope 
The Governor of Louisiana wears underwear
I saw him on TV 
He must have had tight underwear 
He squirmed a lot 
Underwear can really get you in a bind 
You have seen the underwear ads for men and women 
so alike but so different 
Women’s underwear holds things up 
Men’s underwear holds things down 
Underwear is one thing 
men and women do have in common 
Underwear is all we have between us 
You have seen the three-color pictures 
with crotches encircled 
to show the areas of extra strength 
with three-way stretch 
promising full freedom of action 
Don’t be deceived 
It’s all based on the two-party system 
which doesn’t allow much freedom of choice 
the way things are set up 
America in its Underwear 
struggles thru the night 
Underwear controls everything in the end 
Take foundation garments for instance 
They are really fascist forms 
of underground government 
making people believe 
something but the truth 
telling you what you can of can’t do 
Did you ever try to get around a girdle
Perhaps Non-Violent Action 
is the only answer 
Did Gandhi wear a girdle? 
Did Lady Macbeth wear a girdle? 
Was that why Macbeth murdered sleep?

And the spot she was always rubbing -
Was it really her underwear?
Modern anglosaxon ladies
must have huge guilt complexes
always washing and washing and washing
Out damned spot
Underwear with spots very suspicious
Underwear with bulges very shocking
Underwear on clothesline a great flag of freedom
Someone has escaped his Underwear
May be naked somewhere
Help!
But don’t worry
Everybody’s still hung up in it
There won’t be no real revolution
And poetry still the underwear of the soul
And underwear still covering
a multitude of faults 

in the geological sense -
strange sedimentary stones, inscrutable cracks! 
If I were you I’d keep aside 
an oversize pair of winter underwear 
Do not go naked into that good night 
And in the meantime 
keep calm and warm and dry 
No use stirring ourselves up prematurely 
‘over Nothing’
Move forward with dignity 
hand in vest 
Don’t get emotional 
And death shall have no dominion 
There’s plenty of time my darling 
Are we not still young and easy? 

Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Thomas Sayers Ellis

I attended Ellis' poetry reading Monday and must say that I was disappointed. I was really impressed and entertained by the videos you showed us in class Monday. I went to the reading expecting what I had seen in the National Poetry Slam videos but left the reading let down. I will give him credit for the risk he takes with his writing and how it is definitely unique, but his style did not take a liking to me. Honestly, I found the performance more of an annoyance. There were many times where I was not even able to understand what he was saying, therefore I could not even grasp the principle of his words. There were a few times where I was able to pick out a few lines, and some were pretty powerful. Overall, his work seemed to choppy with an inconsistent flow of thoughts and rhythm. It did not appeal to me at all.
If I had to choose a favorite, or a few, a couple that stood out to me was the one where he talked of how he played percussion and his 'poetry line' then spoke a poem based on that in mind. Another was "About Time." Both are in his new book, "Skin Ink."
Although I was thoroughly disappointed by this poet, I still am glad I went, believe it or not. I like how this course is exposing me to so many different styles of poetry and writers. I find it really interesting and I am learning so much. I have noticed that I am loving poetry even more than I did when I enrolled into this course! By the way, I really am hoping that we are able to put together a course which will allow us to concentrate on the study of poetry from another country with the opportunity available for us to travel there as well. That would expose even deeper into a subject in which I have such a growing passion for.
I can say with great sincerity, that I am looking forward to future poetry reading held on campus.

Monday, October 4, 2010

Best Class Ever.

Today, we talked of how the free verse structure in poetry is much more common in the present day poetry. It is a more modern form of structure and was introduced by Walt Whitman. I am very thankful for this man and for his courage to actually go through with publishing his free verse poetry. Why am I thankful? Because it's probably my favorite structure of poetry. To me, the lack of rhyme, meter, and pattern, leaves the poem as just dry emotion, which is very appealing to me. When rhyme is added in, it's to "sing-songy" for me, and it doesn't seem as real. It seems as if things are more of a lie or dramatized just so it fits within a certain structure and set of guidelines and rules. With free verse, you make your poem whatever you want it to be. That's how poetry should be. It should be the expression of ones emotions and thoughts in whichever way pleases the writer most. That's what I see free verse as.
You read us a number of your poems today from your book, "Mother Love". I honestly loved them all. And I promise I am not just saying this to be a suck-up and hope for an A in your class. I was really drawn to your writing and just got done searching for your book on Amazon.com. However, the book, "The House on Beartown Road" came up in my search. Did you write that too? If so, I am buying it! But, I really would love to own a copy of "Mother Love". (Please excuse any typos, or grammatical errors. I don't know if your works should be in italics, underlined or in quotations. I just took a guess.)
I had an awesome time in class today and this is definitely my favorite lesson so far. I would love for you to read more of your work in our class, or even have a separate poetry reading, or both! I hope, that as time passes, I am able to write as well and with as much heart-felt emotion as you are able to.
Thank you so much for sharing your poems with the class today.

Friday, October 1, 2010

Meters!!

In previous classes, we have discussed the variations of characteristics that a poem can have in order to set it apart from the rest. Every poem is unique due to the different qualities they hold.
We talked about how there is a great deal of imagery, symbolism, metaphor, simile, and much more used in poems in order for it to express a certain emotion or situation. Another characteristic that poetry possess's is meter. There are many different types of meters and they can be distinguished through the stressed and unstressed syllables. The variation of these different meters is how a poet further accents a meaning or message he wants portrayed in his work.
Our class seemed to be getting pretty frustrated with the whole concept of meter, stressed and unstressed syllables. But, for me, I found it very interesting. I love how I have a further comprehension of poetic meters and have grown a fascination as to how poets fit them into their work. The meters they choose are always so suitable and really add color to the poem. It's truly inspiring reading poetry with such flow and meaning. They make it seem so easy to set a meter to language. I for one, have a lot of practice to do with meter and setting it to my own words. I have yet to create a masterpiece.